Wow, looks great!

So much work! >,<
The huge blister scared me a bit, though. X'D Huge blister means huge pills...
Ah, I should read the fanfiction. Can't wait to see the rest of your doujin. ^^ (And yes, it sucks that you can just post 10 pictures per post. Tumblr is definitely not the best site for doujins...)
PS: I've added it to the RC blog queue.