@Ahiku
I'm not that much of a writer... especially not in English.
But... but... everything you write is so amazing Q.Q
@Vox about the vocabulary, I actually think about words a lot, not for writing smut because I just can't write smut but in general. And I think that it's true that most words are either academic or vulgar, but here is a counter example (?): making-love.
Oh and I'm in the favor of a new thread!
Back to the doujin topic, anyone read the one where Shion hires someone to pretend to be himself because he dies five years(?) before Nezumi comes back so that person now pretends to be Shion when Nezumi arrives?