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Post links to your new fanfiction here! :3
« on: January 10, 2015, 05:32:23 am »
Hey there! I thought that, can share your new fanfics and chapters here. 
Advertise yourself a bit, okay? ;D

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« Reply #1 on: January 12, 2015, 10:42:40 pm »
Uhhh... Well, I'm working on Melodic Minor more, if anyone's interested. I've finally crossed the 50,000 word threshold and I'm nowhere near done. Here's a link to my latest chapter. http://bienenkonigin.tumblr.com/post/107957139671/melodic-minor-chapter-23

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« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2015, 03:47:07 pm »
Ok, I'm still unsure about it. Uh I never wrote anything that had more then 20 notebook pages (and in english) but here it goes:

Not Perfect (since I was listening Perfect by Hedley lately to NO.6, I would make manga amv to it if I had more time)
 
http://karereiko.tumblr.com/post/114246079687/not-perfect-chapter-1-one-up-one-down
http://karereiko.tumblr.com/post/114246438852/not-perfect-chapter-2-small-steps
http://karereiko.tumblr.com/post/114324320042/not-perfect-chapter-3-promises

Tomorrow I will check over once again third chapter and upload it too, then work on next one. As I said in "Private chat" I've sort whole story into Arcs. Here are the most big ones with I will build story around:

1.   Reunion
2.   Recovery
3.   Fight
4.   Birthday
5.   Christmas
6.   Festival
7.   Trip
8.   Attack


For now those 3 chapters are contain Reunion arc, thought I don't have strict border between Reunion and Recovery arc.
Anyway Sorry for it! (run away with ashamed)


Edit: Added 3rd chapter.
« Last Edit: March 22, 2015, 12:11:34 pm by kare_reiko »

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« Reply #3 on: March 23, 2015, 11:55:06 am »
@kare_reiko: ah, thank you for sharing!! I wanted to wait with replying until I'd read them all, but the first one is already long, so it might take a bit.

So thanks so much for sharing and brb, I found something to keep me occupied for tonight!! Can't wait to get to it ^_^

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« Reply #4 on: March 24, 2015, 12:51:26 am »
@kare-reiko: I read the first chapter!!
I'm excited to see where it'll go. I'm also glad that you included bits of their lives before reunion; it felt really natural and appropriate. ;u; I can't imagine what it's like to write a story in a foreign language, but, though you have some tense and vocabulary errors, the main point of the piece still gets through and you have some really powerful lines! T_T (I could quote some of my favorites but then it would end up being spoilers here, so I'll comment on AO3 with them.) Both Shion and Nezumi are also really in-character and their actions don't feel awkward or out of place.

Thank you for sharing! :D

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« Reply #5 on: March 27, 2015, 12:58:08 pm »
Thank both of you. I glad you stopped and comment it, I didn't want to write here earlier because later it would end with me double posting and I don't like that.

Anyway here is fresh 4th chapter, I update it on AO3 too:
http://karereiko.tumblr.com/post/114767471352/not-perfect-chapter-4

Might be spoilers for those 4 chapters?

Really, sometimes I don't have control over how fast boys relationship move on, I was always thinking Nezumi would confess "I love you" around time when he promise to stay with Shion, but when I was writing it it didn't feel right, some other things don't fit yet too.

I have some idea about adding some bad thing to Nezumi past that I would include in Birthday arc but I'm still really unsure about it, Festival and Attack arcs will be hard for Shion, so I thought, for them to be equal Nezumi should get a little kicks too XD.
I don't want to wrote story where Shion will look like lame duck XD.

Anyway Inukashi in next chapter, I will keep her as a girl, sorry, it burned in my mind that Inukashi is a girl XD.
 

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« Reply #6 on: April 07, 2015, 04:50:21 am »
@kare_reiko: ... I didn't come back to this thread to reply, did I. SHAME ON ME.


Anyway! Got all caught up now including the fourth chapter, I really like where you're going with this! I like all the little details and references to canon (Shion's nose biting specialty, ahhh yesss), and I really like how you're including more and more characters - all my love for Karan, ahh. Poor Shion, and now I kind of fear what you're going to put Nezumi through, but it helps knowing that's related to his past and not the present and that they're moving forward in the present. (I really need these two to be happy, hohum) I love the pace you're currently taking, it feels very natural.

Ah, and like @Meopat said, I really liked the parts pre-reunion being included as well, it's important to see where they're coming from and it all comes together naturally. And I admire you a lot for writing something this long and thought-out in a different language. Though there are times when it's noticeable English isn't your first language, that didn't take anything away from the story overall for me and the characters definitely shine through. Yeah, they do have their own will when you write them, don't they. So demanding XD

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« Reply #7 on: April 11, 2015, 09:44:39 pm »
Well, I did this new thing with the help of @Vox: http://archiveofourown.org/works/3726787/chapters/8257942


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« Reply #8 on: April 17, 2015, 07:48:42 am »
Thank you listenforthelove for so long comment. I'm happy you like it. Finely next chapter X_x   
http://karereiko.tumblr.com/post/116638479757/not-perfect-chapter-5

I was going to write more, until end of current Recovery arc, but I think from tomorrow I will start draw second part of "long winter" doujin. I will go to my boyfriend, I could draw there but I don't want to bring my drawing tablet and programs through half country. So first finishing drawing, programming it to post itself on May 6th, then back to writing.

Anyway 5th chapter turned into long one, 6th will be shorter, then finely time skip (not long one this time, only like 2-3 weeks) to Fight Arc.     

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« Reply #9 on: April 17, 2015, 05:28:34 pm »
@AoYokai: oooohhhh snap TWIST, dang. I was not expecting THAT to be why Shion was different. Super curious now to see where this is going to lead!!

@kare_reiko: yaaaay you updated! It's a little late here so I'm gonna bookmark it and read it tomorrow or Sunday, looking forward to it! Ahhh and good luck with drawing, also very much looking forward to see those results =)

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« Reply #10 on: May 05, 2015, 01:43:34 pm »
I was dead for a few weeks. Writing-wise, forum-wise, fandom-wise. oops. So I didn't see that you commented about my fic until @siions told me you did oTL Sorry about that. And thanks :D

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« Reply #11 on: May 18, 2015, 02:51:52 pm »
Anyway 5th chapter turned into long one, 6th will be shorter, then finely time skip (not long one this time, only like 2-3 weeks) to Fight Arc.     

Yeah right =__=, it turned out that chapter 6th have 8000+ words. I was struggling with second part so much that I didn't think if I manage to write it down in next week, thank god that I yesterday in night had better day and it smoothly worked out until end. It was so hard to write that I was thinking about posting first part as chapter alone and keep working at smut part, but chapter with almost only smut, it didn't sound right. Good smut is when in story smut isn't most important thing, just add.

Here's chapter 6:
http://karereiko.tumblr.com/post/119298480887/not-perfect-chapter-6

Now second arc is done, now Fighting arc, some drama will be thrown over faces.
     

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« Reply #12 on: May 29, 2015, 10:14:40 am »
Next chapter,
http://karereiko.tumblr.com/post/120190330237/not-perfect-chapter-7

And cliffhanger because I never done one XD.