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Re: Nezushi poetry
« Reply #15 on: November 05, 2014, 03:25:04 pm »
@Ahiku: I really do like my teacher! I've never had someone like her.
I never had a class like this when I was in high school, but the one I'm in is a class at my college especially for creative writing. We have a department of classes for poetry and fiction writing... it's actually one of the reasons I chose this school ^^ 

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Re: Nezushi poetry
« Reply #16 on: November 24, 2014, 07:11:01 pm »
Ah... I feel awkward commenting on this post twice in a row, but here goes!

I'm not sure how many of you have read the sonnet I posted on here earlier (probably a good number of you), but I kind of wanted to write another No. 6 inspired poem... the only problem is that I can't really think of another one to write. So I thought maybe I could ask you guys for inspiration/requests? I could do another sonnet, or something else if you would like. So...um, please?   

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Re: Nezushi poetry
« Reply #17 on: November 24, 2014, 07:50:43 pm »
I should not be online right now bye

Here are things that I can think of that might help inspire my poetry. I don't know if they'll help you, but maybe!
1. pick a motif in the story and see what new things you can get out of it. make an image into a relationship symbol. Like, the mice, the superfibre scarf, shion's hair, the sky (they mention that a lot), the forest (there's a quote about how nezumi's like a forest, and the further in you go the more mysterious he gets), the cherry cake, the thunderstorm, the wall, the wind, a colour like grey or red, etc.
2. try and re-create a mood in a verse. what do you think their peaceful evenings are like, their hectic days?
3. just listen to **** tonnes of music
4. imagine how the story would have been different if one small choice had or hadn't been made, or if one small coincidence occurred. how would the characters feel about it? what would or wouldn't change between them? (idk i just really like the thought of other possibilities and different timelines and things)
5. alternatively, what would be constant across universes/timelines no matter what??

I guess it's just a matter of zeroing in on one motif or topic or mood or moment that interests you.
Yeah... that's all the advice I got. Sorry. ^^;;

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Re: Nezushi poetry
« Reply #18 on: November 24, 2014, 10:30:01 pm »
@ Vox: Ah, thanks a lot, actually! I'll definitely have to keep these in mind! ^^

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Re: Nezushi poetry
« Reply #19 on: November 25, 2014, 12:02:52 pm »
@this-is-our-truth
Hmmm... I'd like to read a poem that describes Eve's beauty. :3
Or maybe a poem about nature when Nezumi is wandering.

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Re: Nezushi poetry
« Reply #20 on: November 26, 2014, 08:57:10 am »
@this-is-our-truth: So, Ahiku mentioned I should ask you and I thought it would be a good idea xD

I want to write a fanfic for New Year's Eve with Nezumi standing on the balcony of Karan's Bakery during the fireworks and singing. Problem is: I need something like a songtext. To put it into the fanfiction :) I'd say something about fireworks and new beginnings or anything that comes to your mind about New Year and Nezumi or No.6, really xD

Only if you like to do it of course ^^

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Re: Nezushi poetry
« Reply #21 on: November 26, 2014, 09:28:46 pm »
@ lawlya

Ahhh, sorry! I tried to respond to this earlier, but I think my reply got deleted!

I think your idea sounds fantastic! I would love to help!!  :3  It might take me about a week and a half to have the chance to do it though, since next week is my last week of classes, and then it is an exam week from hell.

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Re: Nezushi poetry
« Reply #22 on: November 27, 2014, 07:50:18 am »
Don't worry about the time :) I wrote the whole thing today but don't know how it turned out until I edit it tomorrow. I can wait for it ^^

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Re: Nezushi poetry
« Reply #23 on: November 27, 2014, 09:01:12 am »
Okay! Yeah, I would be more than happy to help then! ^^
I'll probably write it as a celebration of finishing exams XD

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Re: Nezushi poetry
« Reply #24 on: December 15, 2014, 12:07:53 am »
@ lawlya: Hey! I'm finally finished with finals, so was going to write that song for you! :)
First, I just wanted to ask if there are any other details you could tell me about your fic, so that maybe I could make the song fit the story a bit more?
Otherwise, I can definitely come up with something more general. Just wanted to ask before I got started ^^

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Re: Nezushi poetry
« Reply #25 on: December 15, 2014, 05:26:09 am »
You can even read it :) I'm drafting it right now and I'm publishing the link on the 'Holy Day Event'-thread ^^ I filled the spaces where your lyrics would be with lyrics from another song so if that destroys your creativity and such, don't read them xD

Thank you again for writing something; I'm sure it's gonna be awesome >w<

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Re: Nezushi poetry
« Reply #26 on: December 15, 2014, 02:02:46 pm »
Ah, thanks! I found it in the drafts, but when I click the "Read More" it says "url not found" ^^

It's no problem! I'm going to have a lot of fun with this!!

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Re: Nezushi poetry
« Reply #27 on: December 15, 2014, 02:22:18 pm »
That's ... odd. It works for me if I click on the right upper corner ... Try it with this? If not, I'm gonna send it to you via Private Message :)

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Re: Nezushi poetry
« Reply #28 on: December 15, 2014, 03:34:08 pm »
That worked! Thanks! I'm off to read and write now ! :3

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Re: Nezushi poetry
« Reply #29 on: December 16, 2014, 08:00:24 am »
Hm, I just followed the link Lawl had posted in the Holy Day Event thread. o.o It works just fine.
(But when I go to the drafts and use "click more" I also get the message "url not found". XD Weird.)

(Oh, but clicking in the upper corner helps. Didn't know that. X'D Ahhh!)