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Re: Post links to your new fanfiction here! :3
« on: March 24, 2015, 12:51:26 am »
@kare-reiko: I read the first chapter!!
I'm excited to see where it'll go. I'm also glad that you included bits of their lives before reunion; it felt really natural and appropriate. ;u; I can't imagine what it's like to write a story in a foreign language, but, though you have some tense and vocabulary errors, the main point of the piece still gets through and you have some really powerful lines! T_T (I could quote some of my favorites but then it would end up being spoilers here, so I'll comment on AO3 with them.) Both Shion and Nezumi are also really in-character and their actions don't feel awkward or out of place.

Thank you for sharing! :D